Breezy

There are several reasons I like this poem. One is that the title doesn't seem like an afterthought. It adds to the experience of reading the poem. Just the title ...

I write a lot of short stories. A lot. Penned a couple of novels for Nanowrimo, and I write a ton of poetry and protest songs. I'm glad I've finally ...

How do you rate with new YWS? Can you still do that? This contains swearing and mentions of suicide. Chapter One is posted separately. I'm not good with travel situations ...

A splintered fence— pin-strung and puckered mouths, plucked, the roses are dying. Messiah strokes their ranks, steps between the feather-lipped heads to inquire, What mortal needle sows stem to soul

I'm an INTP too ;D REASON FOR WRITING: I'm bored. That's the long and short of it. I write because my reality bores me. Within that, my main reason is ...

Oh man, this made me think of Jeff Buckley and made me sad inside. ): I'm going to be blunt. I wasn't a huge fan of this piece. Now, hear ...

Thank you both for your insightful reviews. You know, it's funny, because you both mention my long-time struggle with comma addiction(I am currently apart of the C.A.A. division in New ...

Thank you so much for the well-thought out review! I'm glad you picked up on Quinn's depth. He's not in the story physically, but his presence, in a way, makes ...

EDIT: is this format looking odd on anyone elses computer? I'm concerned... Learning to Fly Chapter One: Earth Bound Misfit "If I never had a cent, I'd be rich as ...

Whoo - hoo! *sharpens her claws* Let's rip this apart! In a good way, I mean. I'll go line by line/paragraph by paragraph. The Inch Chapter 1 - Meeting I ...

David: (immediately brightens) Yeah, I am. For almost a year, now. I know I'm young but... I just can't think about what it would be like without her, you know? ...

I first read this and saw words like "confusion" and "ardor" and was thinking, wow, this must be depressing. It sounds really heavy. But in the end I interpret it ...

Love the concept! I just think that you've got some work to do on making it flow better. "Inside a plastic girl, within a plastic shell, Lives a lonely soul ...

I liked the length. I think that when you write something short, it makes every single letter, every word, that much more important. "What I thought went up were the ...

(First attempt at a sestina! Also, first work I've posted on YWS! The capitalization is all done on purpose. Hope this is in the right forum...) Rock and Roll High ...