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BreenaJames

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Take A Chance- 1

    Hey theotherone I'm Bree and I'll be writing you a review today. First off let me say this story has a good plot it just needs some tweaking. My alarm ...

    Sep 5, 2010
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Dark Prison

    Wow, that's all I can say wow. The detail was amazing and as was the emotion. I do have one thing I didn't like about it, that you had someone ...

    Aug 19, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Shipwreck Isle ch. 1

    I really liked your story but I have a few(or a lot) nitpicks. I finally came home to Shipwreck Isle the summer of my 15th birthday. I knew that it ...

    Aug 10, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: A Queen's Kidnapping

    I really enjoyed reading this story. There were a couple of grammar and spelling errors but otherwise good job. I really want to know what happened to her parents it ...

    Aug 3, 2010


If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put the foundations under them.
— Henry David Thoreau, "Walden"