BreenaJames

The week passed in a blur and I couldn’t believe that we were (you should change this to "it was" so that it makes more sense finally Friday. And it ...

Hey theotherone I'm Bree and I'll be writing you a review today. First off let me say this story has a good plot it just needs some tweaking. My alarm ...

Wow, that's all I can say wow. The detail was amazing and as was the emotion. I do have one thing I didn't like about it, that you had someone ...

I'm still editing it so I didn't mean to post it

do not read hit submit instead of save!!!!!!!

Now that I have this fully edited please ignore the comment at the bottom that says not to read it. I hope that this is much better than the last ...

First of all, thanks to everyone who reviewed my story. Second I'm working on an edited of version. Oh and to answer Fire's question technically I wrote the story before ...

This is my first posted work so please sorry if it's a little hard to read. By the way this is the prologue to the real thing. Please wait to ...

Thank you, this is soooo much better. I think that you made a few typos here and there but otherwise very good. By the way I'm writing my own fantasy ...

No, it's not cliche at all, if anything it's the exact opposite of cliche.

I really liked your story but I have a few(or a lot) nitpicks. I finally came home to Shipwreck Isle the summer of my 15th birthday. I knew that it ...

Hey mizz, just curious but what is pm I've seen people say it but i have no idea what it is :?: .

Hola people :D I'm Breena but you can call me Bree. I'm new to the site and would love to make some yms friends. By the way I really like ...

I really enjoyed reading this story. There were a couple of grammar and spelling errors but otherwise good job. I really want to know what happened to her parents it ...