BreeTaylor

Thank you for your advice and i do see where you are coming from. :) There are other chapters and i will notify you when they are posted.

Thank you so much for your encouragement and compliments. Im so glad you like it. I've always had an issue with my grammar and punctuation, but I'll surely work on ...

Im so glad you like it!!! i really appreciate your opinion. So cut it up? How so, can you give me an example?

I rewrote chapter one! This is what it has become. I've got more chapters to come and I hope everyone likes these changes and the way the story will be ...

I agree, you have a very soft vocabulary and I found myself whispering the words as I read. Like if I read it in my normal tone, the words would ...

Hello! Yes! My spelling and grammar. Grammar is a flaw of mine and something i really do need to work on. Im glad that you approve of this chapter because ...

Hi! Thankyou for wanting to be my reviewer and I am so glad that you like this chapter. Im glad you like the horror because I plan on putting Bay ...

Thankyou for your advice. :)

I see. :) good luck with your writing.