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Since you asked specifically for help with grammar, I thought I'd write my crit within your script; I find it easier to make suggestions that way :) Egeus: Hermia’s wildly ...

Essentially, this is an adaptation of William Shakespeare's A Midsummer Night's Dream -- but this version is by no means a comedy. Rating for sexual references and coarse language. It's ...

I love this character! His voice is coming across so clearly and his sense of humour is to die for. I assume that he's making some sort of video diary ...

Heya -- this immediately caught my eye because I'm in the process of writing my own adaption of A Midsummer Night's Dream . But on reading this, it looks like ...

Hi from another newbie :D You're an Aussie, too? Awesome! Where are you from? (I'm a Perthite, myself.) As a matter of fact ... What else should I put? I'm ...

I like the idea of using the formula of first two initials, then surname ... but I happen to have rather unfortunate initials. In fact, I try to avoid letting ...

So this is, I suppose, the thread that from hereon in will be dedicated to my novel-in-progress, The Stitching . I like being tidy when I can (though the state ...

Debilitating is also a good one. Some poor girl tried to say it on the radio today, but it came out as "deliberating" instead, and completely messed up the meaning ...

That's pretty funny, because most everyone I know would love to have a "proper" white Christmas. That's not to say we don't try. My family has the full hot Christmas ...

For some reason, Alice jumped out at me. Stephanie was another one that crossed my mind. Good luck with writing your story! :D

Right now, I'm having a blast with Being Elizabeth Bennet by Emma Campbell Webster. It's like a choose-your-own adventure book where you are Lizzy Bennet, the protagonist of Jane Austen's ...

... I think I get what you're talking about. I think. In my ideal world, writing would always be judged on nothing but its own merits. We would just look ...

I loved reading this piece -- I'm a big fan of stories about Roma, and you write well :) I normally would let this go, but since it's the opening ...

First off, I loved reading this, *lilmisswritergal*. It sounds like the premise to a fascinating book. I know that my review is kind of on the long side, but to ...

Verfremdungseffekt. You only need to say it once for it to sound totally weird. It's a word relevant to the theatre practices of Bertolt Brecht and is a way of ...