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Chapter 2 “Wow, is she always like that?” Lilly asked Crystal as they stared at the spot where Ember had disappeared through the door. stared at the door? “Well, she ...

If you give this one a better beginning... Also, why even give it a prologue?

Chapter 1 Ember stared at the board, being quite bored herself here, you can explain why she is so bored. Just because school is boring to you doesn't mean that ...

This is a novel I someday intend to publish, so please no stealing! Well, I'm not offended in the least. Prologue Snow began to fall gently on the soft blanket ...

Chapter 3 I felt someone jab me in the stomach, and I opened my eyes, only to see Angela. A worried look captivated her pale face, and I could see ...

An old piece of mine. Think of each paragraph as their own miniature chapters. The abruptness is intentional. The lack of an identity is intentional. The lack of age and ...

(See bottom for important information before you read) “Are you sure you’ll be alright on your own? Memphis won’t be happy if I do, but I could stay until they ...

We generally looked like wolves. The exceptions being that our ears were wider and longer, and our back legs were longer, giving us more speed.' Considering that this was an ...

We were just talking about the color system last night. I commend you on that.

The point was that the guy was dead the whole time. The girl was to reflect innocence in a way that it would be a little sickening. Also, I wasn't ...

Thought I try my hand on posting. G'luck 'reviewing' this. The layout was simple—a table with two chairs set across from each other. A candlestick stood on the middle of ...

Alright, so I was reading a thread about fantasy animals and decided to make two species of my own. It was late at night, and the Panin was somewhat humanoid, ...

Chapter 2 As soon as I left the house, I took off running. Why did you continue immediately from chapter 1? This doesn't seem like a whole other chapter, but ...

Hey Will! Another from YWO, huh? I tried it out, but found it too confusing! :( So I am a YWS girl! If you like writing fantasy or just want ...

Some people back here would say that Iri is a little obsessed with fantasy, wolves, and Artemis.