BottomlessEyes

These are really good, the last one...the one about love was probably my favorite. I love the emotion in it...I Loved the emotion in all of them. The one thing ...

Can't wait!

Okay...its been awhile since I've posted anything on this book...please no rude critiques...(is that spelt right) I don't want harsh comments, there is no reason to say hurtful things to ...

Hi! well, I loved your poem, it was great....There was great imigary in this peice, and you have talent! My favorite stanza was the third one. It was good, and ...

Hello Emely! Welcome to YWS! :-D I loved the way you wrote this! Every line made me want more, and thats really good, obviously. I just wonder, I know that ...

Well.....TAH DAH! I don't know what to believe. I fall harder every day, And it's for you. I dream every night, It's of you. I don' t know what I ...

Well...this is a comment and nothing else! This was really awesome! I loved the style you had it gave me chills. :) Great job!!!!

Okay...this is all what I remember from what I wrote down in my journal...i lost it, so when I find the original version, i will be sure to post it! ...

Okay...its been awhile since I've posted anything on this book...please no rude critiques...(is that spelt right) This is a dream! :~D School's over, and I look over to where that ...

Head aching Heart breaking Where is the light I saw in you? All I wanted was the truth! Too bad I couldn't realize That you were hiding behind lies What ...

You don't understand Never did Never will You were my life Until you passed me by You don't understand The pain in my mind The tears that I've shed You ...

Okay, well, I write in sections so this is the last he wont be gone forever! *************** I sat down, wondering why Cameron was acting so weird. I looked up ...

Great job girlie!!! WHAT i finally had the time to look at it! Its wonderful, and I have the chapter on Brandon...but I wont post it for a while i ...

I realize that there are no indentions...but i copied and pasted it from a document and it took them i will be sure to get them bsck ASAP!!!!!!! But in ...

I wrote this for a it any good? When He Fell Michael opened his eyes to a dark starlit sky. He knew right away that he was no longer in ...