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Re: Love me, Michelle (Please critique!)
Oh and Olivia, I see your right with the form of language I used. I was quite puzzled with it myself during the whole process, I wasn't sure which one ...
Sep 10, 2008 -
Re: Love me, Michelle (Please critique!)
Wow, thank you all for your comments! This story isn't going to spring into anything really, it was a draft for another chapter I've written.
Sep 9, 2008 -
Re: Love me, Michelle (Please critique!)
Bursts of red and yellow filled the streets of Ketchikan. To my delight, autumn was sprinkling its magic every where and the cool air of September was rich with the ...
Sep 9, 2008
