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Re: Strangely So... Chap. 1
Hahahaha I'm working on it
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: Urban Factory Ch. 1
I like it! But to give some criticism, the part where you said "He had done this because The Finisher was curious as to how the festers made such an ...
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: Removed
I loved your story, and I love the conflict, emotions, and the pain at the end, especially the way you described the death. However, maybe your story was a little ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Strangely So... Chap. 1
1. Strangely so, the weather wasn’t constantly changing anymore. It was winter, and everything about this mountainous desert was cold and windy. Tumbleweeds were a rarity, but they were still ...
Jul 16, 2010
