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I didn't know what came over me as I wrote this Chapter, but I sort of deemed Blake as bipolar. So... he's in mania right now, and in Chapter 3, ...

This reminds me of the movie "The book of eli" with Denzil (?) Washington. I thought this was pretty nice, although somehow, in some strange, inconceivable way, I felt that ...

I agree with Dragonet. That wasn't long at all! I breezed through it in four minutes :D I loved it. I sounded casual, and the conversations weren't at all forced. ...

Me! Thank you a lot. My novel has three chapters, and it's a vampire novel (I'm trying my veryyyyyy best to stay as far away as possible from Twilight and ...

Hello AS. I have a novel with three chapters (and still going). I need some criticism and just some comments that you can make. Thanks!

Yes!! Thank you so much for posting something like this. My story's name is Strangely So... or I really need some reviews for my story. thankyou

Very interesting, although a little long. The third chapter in a series I hope will someday become a novel. (For the very few people who're following this story, I've changed ...

Sounds gleefully interesting, and I can't wait to see more! This story's written in first person, which should give plenty of depth and emotion regarding the main character.

That's a great story. I'd love for something after this. Even though, usually, I'm not a fan for the stories just talking about ordinary life, but this one is pretty ...

Well, I guess you could say that's an inside joke that goes around most of the schools I've been to. I don't know where it started, but I think it's ...

In Chapter 1 I mentioned that her name was Isabel. I actually had it pictured in a completely different room. I guess I could have said Principles of Physics or ...

2. As they exited the classroom and headed against the current, they both were silent. Without a doubt, they were thinking about the strange person whom they just met as ...

I thought that this was quite an interesting story, especially since all of it is in third person and there's no real dialogue. But I found that it was an ...

Maybe I'm a bit critical even though I just joined YWS, but I guess it's just the truth. Besides, you told us to take it apart. The "I'm late" part ...

That's pretty strong... and I completely agree. I couldn't find any errors to pick out, probably because there was none. :D And I really liked the setting and the POV ...