BookGirl

Very nice, I like how you show us the past and the present in this story. The past being how the merchant became a manticore and the present being the ...

Very nice, different, something that I do have to say, you went a little fast with Ariel and Gabriel's relationship. When Ariel saw Gabriel's wings shouldn't she have asked questions ...

This is so good. The vamyre actually dies, very nice. Like everyone else noticed, I noticed a few mistakes but those can be edited easily. I loved the ending, you ...

I haven't read Mockingjay, but I have read the first two. This is brilliant, I want to read more! :) You have a really good storyline and you really have ...

I loved it! But I was sad at the end, I can't wait for Angel! Dylan wasn't very big in this story but he was likeable. Angel: The summary so ...

This is great I was always wondered what Voldemort would be thinking in certain situations. And the way you described how he saw Harry was interesting, though you might actually ...

Hey Dragons, I love you story but, and I hate to do this, there's a few small problems. All you need to do is slow the story down a bit, ...