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Re: Fire and Shadow: Prologue
wow. I would love to buy this as a published hard back book one day. the detail and the feeling i get when i read this is amazing. You have ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: The price of love
the second paragrah "MAKE A HOLE" the doctors.... you forgot the word said. the third paragraph.....The general was covered in blood but appeared to be unharmed, a doctor came up ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: The Title Right Now Is The School Chapter 1 Part 1
you could have the story be sort of boring until the first party of the year and write about how the middle schooler's want to hang with the high schooler's ...
Dec 10, 2011