Boni_Bee

Ok, so after reading this my prologue is probably hopeless!! ^_^ time to go back to the drawing board...

Hey they're some great tips! Makes sense, and I'll keep those in mind!

Ok, I posted the first rough chapter in 'Historical Fiction'. I'm glad to be back writing, but don't really feel as if I've gotten 'into the swing' of it yet... ...

Thankyou winie, angels and Trikky! I appreciate your feedback. I think I will go with the first paragraph I posted - in third person :)

I am beginning a book about my ancestors who came over on the first fleet as convicts. I have in my posession a wonderful book detailing all the facts and ...

Hehe, I skipped the first part of this topic :P but when I got to the end I did go back and read it... :wink: You have some good points ...

Wow, that is a great idea Snoink! :D I'll definatly try it out!

Thanks for that, I'll see if I can come up with anything...but I'm not going to stand on my chair, or It will tip up :P

I am writing a simple story for a magazine (continuing each issue) and it is about a girl who goes camping with a friend, and her friend is rather wild, ...