Boni_Bee

5/10 because I don't get it....lol :?

Powerful...! Good job. It was a bit disjointed, but I think that helped to bring the message across more

Why is it that most of your poems have a third line that doesn't quite fit? lol...good job though, this made me laugh :P Just a typo.. it is 'smarter' ...

I liked this :) It had a nice, happy-go-lucky feel to it, that is easy to relate to. The only verse that didn't quite fit was the 'leap for a ...

Pride and Prejudice (quite a favourite of everyones!) The Scarlet Pimpernel The Bible

Sorry far from it :wink: TPBM has had a critique done on a work of theirs by me... (or they wish!)

I gave you 1 point!!! *pats self on back* :lol:

That is an interesting point... I can see what you mean; I'll have to think about it. Yes, the chapters are rather short, but I'm working on that :wink:

:oops: *hides behind a book* ....Welcome, Jimmybug! I think you'll enjoy YWS.... Well, you know me, so I won't bother introducing myself...lol Yeah, being in the top ten Harmonica players ...

There once was a spider, very small who hung one day upon the wall. Harmless and gentle, and very nice, he could disappear within a trice. Then along came a ...

7/10 no you're not! :wink:

This was a really good effort! I think you said it all, without repeating yourself. Good job :)

I agree with bubblewrapped. It is a very good poem though! :D Good job

7/10 I see.... (sorry, old topic :P)

4. "Pride and Prejudice" by Jane Austen. Rich women, yippie. Hey, I like that book! It is very well written, if I must say! :wink: The Bible is divinely inspired. ...