Boni_Bee

Chapter 1 The sun is rising, shining all its glory on the old homestead, which stands between two old gum trees. A kookaburra sings his greeting to the morning, waking ...

It sort of grabs you, and makes you go 'yeah, I can relate to that'! It's good how it's short, because any longer and I might have criticized it! lol

It keeps you interested. It does go rather quick, but you could add more description of where the characters are... The names are a bit similar, but they are ok.

They are both very nice :) it does look like something out of a story book, and she reminds me of a damsel in distress! lol

Freedom’s Price Chapter 1 The sun is rising over the mountains in the east as May gives birth to a colt. She whispers his name to him...”Sky”... May licks the ...

It's a very nice story, although, as everyone else has said, the word grey was used just a bit too much. It needs a bit more on the end, and ...

Cool! the start had me a bit confused, but it got better and better as it went along. It sounds like it's going to be great! keep up the good ...

Classical music, playing the violin, reading non-fiction books, standing on top of a hill with the wind blowing in my face, mississipi mud pie (yummm!) lamington's (yummm, again!) galloping horses ...

yeah, exactlly thanks Micha :)

I'm sorry, but you don't realise what I'm talking about :roll:

No :roll:, it's just that we can't fully comprehend that there IS a God out there, who DID create us. You'll find out at the second coming :) I'll see ...

wow, not a single Creationist on here!!!! :shock: The thing is, God created the world in Seven Days. heres why: We use only 10% of our brain capacity, Eistein used ...

Hey! I'm Boni, I live in Australia, and I like writing (duh, why would I join this place if I didn't? lol :roll: :) ) I am looking forward to ...