Boni_Bee

4/10 because it doesn't make much sense, and it's weird...lol

The bible was written by men, true, but NOT thought of by men. It was divinely written, 'heard' by men of God, who wrote it out when he told them. ...

Part III We trudged on, and I begin to get impatient. Why on earth did I ever agree to come down here? I think to myself, clenching my jaw and ...

The train isn't meant to dissapear, and Sally see's the paper first, then Danial see's the poster, and 10 years have passed since then (scary!) lol I think I'll make ...

Part I “Guy’s, come on, or we’ll be late!” Sally sighed, and tucked her long blond hair behind her ear. She tugged on the boys sleeve’s to get their attention. ...

Renee: The bus pulled to a stop as Budd said, “okay everybody out." We all exchanged glances of confusion, but none of us daring to move. Slowly, the five of ...

Hey! I'm Boni...but you already know that :) lol

this is pretty cool, although a bit confusing with all the changing of characters. post more soon :)

thanks for the critque, it was very helpful :) I fixed it up some...

If the parents think they can teach their kids, then they can! I know what it's like at schools, and I would not like to go there. You won't ever ...

wow, that's cool! I like it :) It is a very interesting story, and I didn't get bored with it....lol, great story!

Boys are better at math, and technical things, but we can be pretty good too

The BIG issue that every school kid/parent has, is that they won't get enough social life!!!! how silly is that???!!! I have heaps of friends, I do a lot more ...

Thanks so much!!! :) I can see the problems now, and I'll work on them as soon as I can. I'm glad you like it :)

(Ok, I hope this is in the right thread...it's just a bit of a poem...not too good :?) Life is a wind-tossed wave that rushes for the shore, time rushes ...