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I'll miss this site! :( You did an awesome job with this forum, Nate! Thanks for all the time and effort you have spent on it. I hope to see ...

Thankyou for your comments, stilltyping! :) I'll work on that idea, about adding more lines... :)

Hehe, have a kangaroo, for originality :wink: because that is what writing is, right? We like being origional! :lol: A teddybear is too childish A chimp would be good Dragon, ...

Thanks, Jennafina! :) I'll put some more up this week hopefully...

Thanks Sohini! :D I fixed that up...

Hehe, I skipped the first part of this topic :P but when I got to the end I did go back and read it... :wink: You have some good points ...

Wow, that is a great idea Snoink! :D I'll definatly try it out!

Mananisculization... Don't ask me what it means, ask my brother! And I thought I'd invented 'confuzzled'... :( *sigh*

Wow, that is an awesome story! I think it captured the theme really well! It is a very emotional piece...great job! :D

You should really space out the paragraphs... After the first sentence, you need a comma after realistic and the ". Mr should have a . after it. Mr. But this ...

This is something I have been thinking about for a while, and I was just wanting to get some oppinions on it... Do you think it is good enough to ...

Rorin rubbed his eyes. He looked out the window, his eyes still adjusting to the light. "What? It's not even dawn yet!” How bright is it before dawn? "Hardly," Indun ...

Thanks for that, I'll see if I can come up with anything...but I'm not going to stand on my chair, or It will tip up :P

I am writing a simple story for a magazine (continuing each issue) and it is about a girl who goes camping with a friend, and her friend is rather wild, ...

8/10....interesting...