Boni_Bee

Yeah, I know this is weird, but I thought I'd give it a go Writing challenge 9/19 It was a usual day at school. I was doing my maths quietly, ...

Cool!!! I didn't get the paragraph about when the boy close the curtains, but the rest of it was great! :D I like Ness, she's an interesting character, but I'd ...

Wow! :D It's beautiful!!!

Thanks, Mesh, :) Well, her jeans were old ones, and they were dirty from falling over etc... I'll try and stick with one tense, but I keep forgetting and usiing ...

Hmmm....it's good, but some of the lines are a bit too long, and overall it's a bit longwinded, but I like the idea, and some of the lines are good ...

Great!!! :) One thing...you could say 'chin on her hand' rather than 'hand under her chin', if you get what I mean... :) Anyway, another good chapter, although there wasn't ...

Welcome! :)

That was harsh, Icaruss!!! :? It is only a story written by a kid, but that'd doesn't mean it's trash... I think it's cool, although it needs some improvements

This was an audacious piece! Quite interesting. I wouldn't want to meet your character! It was abrupt, but that gave it a sense of a detatched insaneness Interesting! :)

wow, that's really nice!!! Very poetic, but not as tho it's a poem, if you know what I mean :? lol...great job :)

5/10 because it's....interesting, but doesn't make much sense, lol

Chapter 3 Oh, I can’t stand this any more! Thought Emily desperately, pulling her shawl around her and quickly running up the steep steps to the door. Surprisingly, it was ...

congrats, everyone!!! :)

I have seen a different version of it, with slightly different spellings. But it's funny :)

Thanks, Kay Kay. :) They are going to Australia, it says so in the first chapter. And the rest of the people on the boat are going there too. Sorry ...