Boni_Bee

Thanks, Nefer!!! Sometimes my computer takes out words, or parts of words, and I don't realise that until someone mentions it :? :roll: I'll fix up my story as soon ...

We don't have TV! :D its great!!! :wink: The computer is enough.

Galatea and MisterWaffles are making sense....the rest of youse are not. Jesus Christ was only born into a Jewish family. He wasn't actually a Jew.

When I first read this, I didn't get what you were saying on the second line of each stanza (the opposite to the first line). Nice poem, but some of ...

thanks for letting me know about the A, Mesh :)

Yawwwn....man this is boring , I think, as I wander outside to sit on the wide verander of my house. The air is still and warm, and it feels like ...

^ditto. It was a good poem, but yeah, too forced, and because some of it was rymed and the rest didn't it was hard to read.

Its usual occupant was on the way, fighting their way through the night, as it was a rather windy evening. I think you mean 'fighting his way through the night'. ...

Interesting....! The masks were very unique, and it made sense with the story. Good Job

Good chapter :) I like it better than the others, as it shows more of his personality. Good job

Qi, can't you just accept the plain truth for a change, instead of refuting everything to make it sound like rubbish???

^_^ :roll: :?

I was reading a book a friend gave me ( We Would See Jesus ), and I decided to share some of the quotes in it. ‘Edwin Conklin, a scientist ...

I liked this, it had a sad, forlorn feel to it. I think 'the fisherman and his daughter' was repeated a bit much, but apart from that it was great! ...

they were good! :D I like the first one, it's funny.