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Re: Yes, No, Black, White.
don't have a clue what is the colour of the iris in your eye?
Oct 24, 2005 -
Re: An Ode to Green Day
lol, I don't know if I get it, but its funny :P
Oct 23, 2005 -
Re: Mark of the beast
The world has to end, because when Eve ate the fruit of the Tree of Good and Evil, God said, 'When you eat of the tree, you will surely die'. ...
Oct 23, 2005 -
Re: A War In Evol | Chapter I: The Silver Eagles
Teppei shook in his sleep, sweat covered his face. He was dreaming again, another one of those twisted ones he had become so accustomed to having. It started in a ...
Oct 23, 2005 -
Re: Oh my God - can it be? Yes - it is! EVOLUTION VS CREATION!
Seventh Day Adventist. Although I am not a member of the church, I plan on being baptized next year :D You are Mormon, right? In my faith, the wicked will ...
Oct 23, 2005 -
Re: Oh my God - can it be? Yes - it is! EVOLUTION VS CREATION!
In my religion: The second coming of Christ is the blessed hope of the church, the grand climax of the gospel. The Saviour's coming will be literal, personal, visible, and ...
Oct 23, 2005 -
Re: un-named
here I am standing at your doorstep waiting for you wishing that the rose in my hand hadn’t died pedal by pedal Uh...I think you mean 'petal by petal' each ...
Oct 22, 2005 -
Re: A Sentence of a New Life - Prologue
Thanks, Carmina and Ieatworms!!! :D I really apreciate it. Yeah, I realise I need more detail on the Victorian side of it, and I'll fix that up as soon as ...
Oct 21, 2005 -
Re: One Word Story Book
Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potato to Joe because he was imaging pranks involving birds poop and underwear. Joe d pickles so Ann ...
Oct 21, 2005 -
Re: A Fallen Angel
Nice poem. I liked this, although you sort of repeated yourself a bit, not with the same words, just the same meaning. Yeah, like Niteowl said, there are some line ...
Oct 21, 2005 -
Re: delete this!
She was headed to a small cottage, at the end of town. It had a small vegetable garden in the back, and a flower pot hung in the window. When ...
Oct 21, 2005 -
Re: A Sentence of a New Life - Prologue
Ok, I fixed those errors up :) Should this be moved to the Romantic section??? :? I'm not sure... Anyway, more comments would be appreciated, and I'll post the fourth ...
Oct 20, 2005 -
Re: First Snow
Very nice and simple! I think it could have a few more verses, as it sort of ends abruptly, but very good job :)
Oct 20, 2005 -
Re: "Our Jon"
interesting poem...although it was bit confusing how it changed characters all the time. After the mother was pleading his innocence, it was a bit of a shock to see what ...
Oct 20, 2005 -
Re: Nature poem type thing
In the air, Between the trees, You can feel The cool morning breeze. Very nice Up in the trees, A bird if born. Off the trail, A wolf mourns. I ...
Oct 20, 2005
