Boni_Bee

Wow, this is amazing!! I will post a critique tomorrow, but just wanted to say that this is an amazing story and I can't wait for more!! :D

I liked this. It's kind of abstract, but really neat. Ok, critique...: first some typos Look at me she thinks as t he sun sets quick Look at me she ...

This is a lovely photo, and as BalletDancer7 said, the colours are nicely contrasted although not very sharp. My only critique would be that you only just missed having the ...

I think I started reading at age five, and the first books I read were the Ladybug books about Kate, Tom and Sam the dog.

Well I'm not really back... but just dropping by! Would love to be here more often. I really miss writing!

Thank you Kris :)

Hmm, 8/10 :)

I honestly do almost have a headache after writing this!! I've never done anything quite so hard!! I could only do three and a half lines on the last stanza ...

Well I must say that for not having read the other chapters, I really liked this. It was mostly ordinary dialogue, but it kept me interested most of the way, ...

Thanks niteowl! :)

Wow, this was quite unique. It had me interested until the uncle said "you have been naughty again". Straight away it makes it sound like she's only about 10. How ...

Wow, I haven't been here for ages! I don't think I've been active (as in posting work etc) since 2006! I just haven't had the time, and also my writing ...

I'd like to visit the moon...and look back at the earth. It would be pretty cool :) Btw, I have returned, after an 8 month absence!! yeah, I was on ...

"Your grandmother made that quilt for you," said my mother. This was a good way to start the story, although it is a bit abrupt. Ever since my grandmother ( ...

Is there any way to keep the site online, but just disabled from posting, for a month or so, so we can still read all the stories, and copy the ...