Boni_Bee

wow!!!! Good job!!! At first I thought there was going to be the Prince Charming rescue thing, but no, it turned around!!! :shock: :D Very good

^Ditto! :D It was a very good poem...and I can't say much after what niteowl said, so good job!!!

^ditto to niteowl :D It is a good poem, and thats good if its published, but I only posted my opinion/advice, but that doesn't mean you have to take it....

"27B...27B...." Norman muttered to himself looking from his boarding pass to the seats upholstered alternately in orange, purple, and other shades of tacky. Tacky what? Ding The safety announcement be

He sang all night, no matter what! Darkness and its black gala mantle, Was tightening it grip, Knotting and trying to suffocate us. His subtle fingers could not stand the ...

As i lay awake at night, I think about the day that just went by, Wondering if I could have changed anything to make it better. - you need another ...

you have a signature???

Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potato to Joe because he was imaging pranks involving birds poop and underwear. Joe d pickles so Ann ...

P.S. Yeah, there was no emotion in it at all, actually...its like its from a third persons point of view, not yours.

Hearts breaking Friends leaving Tears falling Like petals from a flower - nice description. This was my fave stanza of the whole thing, and you could have made a nice ...

I am proud to be Australian, (8th generation Aussie) and although I'm not allowed to join any armed forces, (medical reasons/family rules etc) I think I'd die for my country ...

Thanks, sliver*glitter!!! :D I'm glad you like it. Thanks for pointing those out, I'll fix them as soon as I can. With the g.irl thing, I have to put the ...

Thanks, Bluecows :) I'm glad you like it. Anyone else want to comment?

A glance A blink My heart leaps with suprise As I suddenly realise That he, once the boy is now a young man With eyes that search For yours, and ...

In her room Kyla glanced at the silk dress her maid had lain her out and sighed. It was her mothers dress and she was sure her father had intentionally ...