Boni_Bee

Wow, interesting......I think this was very imaginative, and I like the elusive idea of describing someone with the wind and clouds. Awesome! :D

This is cool!!!! :D I'm intrigued about the letters :wink: I hope her Uncle learns his lesson! :P

My Road I think the title needs some work. As you say in the poem, its not just your road, and many others follow the same one, so something more ...

So you want it to say: 'So when the time comes to reveal the truth, please be wise' ???

Thanks, Firestarter! Its just that I wanted to end on a more happy note with the last stanza, but I'll see what I can do....

Ditto to Dremi :) Nice poem, although there was some forced rhyming, but I think you got the idea across well. Good job

Would anyone mind commenting on this, please? :)

This was very nice :) The only thing I didn't like was how you had 'suprise' in the middle of the first stanza, and it didn't rhyme, but the other ...

8/10 because its sort of freaky...lol, just kidding

Welcome! Have fun on here :)

Hmmm....interesting. I'm glad Tom is getting to know some people, although it sort of rushed at the end, but it was good :D I like the open and care free ...

Thanks, Micah! :D The story is in the 1800's....not the 21st Century!!! lol...but I get what you mean...

It Would Be Wise to Think First When, by a condescending statement You decide to unveil a hidden Aspect about me, to the world, First, stop a moment and think ...

Well, its not the actual home thats changed (well, it might have, I haven't seen it for a while), but there was a nice big swamp/billa on the property, and ...

I know that, Griffinkeeper, but Sonicroyal said he would use those spellings because the story is in an European country...