Boni_Bee

Wow, I can really relate to this poem!!! It was nice a short and sweet, and I don't think I could have done it any better....lol...we must have something in ...

She was chasing me now. I hopped I had lost her by now, but she seemed to always find me. I jumped another fence. I think its; 'I hoped I ...

This was interesting!!! :D The only thing I'll point out is that in the first stanza, it says you're sitting under a rock, and then the next lines say you're ...

I think this was very good :D I didn't notice any 'break's, where the others did. I like the last line. Great job :wink:

I'd like some books, A portable CD player with headphones, A hymn book A new bow for my violin Some horse riding lessons A computerized patchwork quilt designer program Some ...

When after you say something you think is important, you look up to realie people arn't listening When people sneak up behind me and say BOO when you just sit ...

This was interesting, except the verse about the 'leafblower', it was too hard to read easily.... I don't want to read this again or I'll find myself repeating it..... 'rake ...

Nice!!! :D It was verry good and expressive, even though its only four lines!!! :wink:

The salt is to heal the wounds and was much used.... Yeah, I think I'll put in somewhere that she had been dobbed in by someone Its in the 1800's...when ...

Chapter 4 Chapter 3 Chapters 1-2 Prologue

Thanks, Carmina :D Yeah, if you read the other chapters you'll get more of an idea about the story. Its just that I wanted her to get whipped a bit, ...

When are you going to post more???? 8) Please post more soon!!! :D

The best pet is a horse!!! :wink: :D

I really like playing violin, and it isn't that hard, once you get used to it :wink:

A 'chook' is what american's call a 'chicken'....lol, we call the baby chooks chickens!!! :lol: I would fly...but you obviously didn't read my first post :wink: