Boni_Bee

Lol, this was good! At first I thought it would be a bit more serious, but I was smiling by the end :D

Wow, this was a very stark really caught my attention. The 'Dear Diary' start to each stanza was nice, and sort of brought it into context a bit more. Good ...

7/10...interesting....

I'd slightly duck down to fit Through the small gap; The entrance to My hide away place. 'I'd duck down slightly to fit' sounds a bit better This was nice. ...

Most d: not sure... Most loved: Areida, Crysi, Smartest: Brad Funniest: Snoink Most serious: not sure Scariest: Qi Member you'd most like to give a hug to: Dusky Sweetest Member: ...

7/10 hahaha....*glares* that was...interesting ^_^ But it REALLY needs some punctuation!!! :wink:

Cliche....! ^_^ It was good, but I've just read so many like it.....

14 days till Christmas :D

Has anyone read these? 1. ‘Dare to Fly’ by Janine Shepherd 2. ‘My God, it’s a Woman!’ By Nancy Bird-Walton 3. ‘Read for the Sky’ by Douglas Bader 4. ‘The ...

7/10 It's interesting....

I like this. The rhyming was good, and not forced. Great job! :D

19 days till Christmas.... :D

I know it’s been more than a year since we last talked, and well I was missing you? That line doesn't work somehow, but the rest.......was awesome!!! I really like ...

lol, I guess its so he doesn't have anything restricting his arms when he's whipping... :? good point though, Sam

I dread going to the I've had some rather painful work done,