Boni_Bee

Thankyou winie, angels and Trikky! I appreciate your feedback. I think I will go with the first paragraph I posted - in third person :)

Yeah typing is my fave way too. Saves time in more than one way because although you might write it out nicely on paper, you then have to type it ...

Well I'm not really back... but just dropping by! Would love to be here more often. I really miss writing! :o *TACKLES* I MIIIIIIIISSSED YOUS! Wow, thanks Snoink!! :) I ...

I am beginning a book about my ancestors who came over on the first fleet as convicts. I have in my posession a wonderful book detailing all the facts and ...

Written about four years ago: Cool! the start had me a bit confused, but it got better and better as it went along. It sounds like it's going to be ...

Me :)

Second half critiqued :) Krillia opened her mouth but Kron interrupted, “Hush!” He pressed a finger to his lips, “We’ll talk outside. Come on.” He led her outside the door. ...

I can't be on here much so thought I'd get a couple of reviews to do and it will keep me happy. I'm not a super duper critiquer but am ...

It sounds like a biography about someone who lived on the edge, and didn't go with the flow...? I'd probably read it How Far They Came

I ticked that summer is for camping, but I forgot to look at the poll properly and realised that I should have ticked 'It's winter here'!! lol A cool, wet ...

Hi Mike! yeah it's a great site hey! I was really happy when I found it five years ago! :) Welcome! I hope you really enjoy being a part of ...

Hi Anna! Welcome back to YWS! Sounds like you're studying a great subject at uni! I look forward to seeing some of your work.

I agree, that is a beautiful poem!! :D

I hope my critique doesn’t seem too harsh. I really do like your story and it has a lot of potential, I’d just like to make some suggestions which you ...

YWS has really helped me when I have to write anything! Being critiqued, and critiquing other work has improved my English and grammer more than schoolwork ever did! Coming back ...