Boni_Bee

Hey thanks for the reviews!! Sorry I haven't been on YWS lately, so didn't get back to this sooner. I'm afraid I don't have much time for writing lately, but ...

Thanks heaps for doing a review Miss Ching! I really appreciate it :)

I never like it when someone says question like 'are guys or girls better at' - because we all have different strengths and weaknesses. Women do write more emotionally, as ...

After I got over my shock I would ask him a lot of questions! Then I'd have all the real life facts right! lol What would you do if you ...

Ok, so after reading this my prologue is probably hopeless!! ^_^ time to go back to the drawing board...

I'm really sorry I haven't had time to do your critique yet! :( life is hectic!

Beautiful! :-) and Amen! I'm not sure I like the actual structure of the poem as it made it a big tricky to read. Can't the lines just be there ...

Honestly, I can't find this group! Is it still going?

When you get time, I'd really like a review on this please! :) :D

I'd be very happy if you could review this! It's a prologue in Historical Fiction. :D

Hmm... 5/10. The first couple of lines are not very interesting and have some spelling/grammer issues. I like how it changes at the end though, and adds humour. ------------------------------ The ...

Welcome to YWS Sapphire! :D I'm Bonnie. You've come to the right place if you want good critiques!! :) Hope you enjoy your time here!

Hey they're some great tips! Makes sense, and I'll keep those in mind!

Ok, I posted the first rough chapter in 'Historical Fiction'. I'm glad to be back writing, but don't really feel as if I've gotten 'into the swing' of it yet... ...

This is a rough quick draft of the first chapter/prologue. This is going to be a big project, writing a story of my ancestors who came to Australia on the ...