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Re: Blinding Fog
So the advice I can give you is that, when writing poetry, things don't always have to rhyme. Sometimes it's better just to forget rhyming, then trying to force it ...
Thu Jan 07, 2010 4:21 am -
Re: Lovers/ What am I to you?
So, I don't think this is horrible, but on the other hand it's not exactly the most original piece on earth. The fear of your bite, From this line I'm ...
Thu Jan 07, 2010 1:43 am -
Re: Flowers in the sun
Hey Amy! This reminds me of the poetry I write on and off, but much better xD. Some of the rhymes feel a little flat, or forced, but overall I ...
Wed Jan 06, 2010 6:47 pm -
Re: Make me....I dare you
Done! Any others?? Please I need something to review!
Wed Jan 06, 2010 6:36 am -
Re: Saving Zanica
Hey Pen! So first, it needs a lot of work. It's a good first draft, but it needs editing and some rewriting. But I'm going to go over the basic ...
Wed Jan 06, 2010 6:35 am -
Re: So happy I could howl!
Hey Howler! (any nicknames you'd like to be called?) I'm Hope :D nice to meet you! Another script writer! Woo! *Highfives* So what's your play about? And lets see a ...
Wed Jan 06, 2010 12:33 am -
Re: <insert witty introduction>
Hey Julia! I'm Hope and welcome to YWS! :D Sweet you live in Long Island? My mom's aunt used to live there, so we visited her, and we go into ...
Tue Jan 05, 2010 1:36 am -
Re: YWS Map December 2009
Oooh look! I'm right there! *Points to the huge mass of orange dots on the eastern coast of the US* Sweet :P.
Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:01 am -
Re: as if this isn't getting old.. i'm new :)
Hey Megan! I'm Hope, nice to meet you :D...Welcome to YWS! I read your introductory blog, and you sound quite a bit like myself in ways. You should fit in ...
Sun Jan 03, 2010 11:17 pm -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
Glad to have you back guys!! :D
Sat Jan 02, 2010 7:49 am -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [4]
Banned for representing something.
Fri Jan 01, 2010 4:12 am -
Re: Greetings
Hey I'm Hope! Nice to meet you! *Tosses cookie* Happy new year to you too!! So can you tell us a little about yourself? What do you like to write? ...
Fri Jan 01, 2010 3:43 am -
Re: Hello! I'm just another newbie!
Hey Chisel, Welcome to YWS! I'm Hope :D. So I'm just wondering what would you call "good music"? Perhaps we share a similar taste in music? See you around! ~Hope
Thu Dec 31, 2009 4:48 am -
Re: Uh, This must be my heaven (I'm new)
Hi Janine! Welcome to YWS! :D Don't worry, we're all really great people here, we love to be silly, and are very lovable. So tell us a little about yourself! ...
Wed Dec 30, 2009 8:26 am -
Re: Uh, hi?
Hi Lsph99! I'm Hope, nice to meet you :D! So do you have any nicknames you like to be called, or do I get to make one up? Haha I ...
Wed Dec 30, 2009 4:49 am
