BondGirl007

okay, so it's not the most original work- With "His golden hair", "Oh why did he leave me?" And other such overused things. But, it's alright. Overall it's an okay ...

Hey Kyousuke, quick tip when doing poetry- Try to avoid things that are overused, such as "My shattering heart was bleeding", because it tends to through off your poems. But ...

Hey Skl, I'm going to make this quick, because it's late and I'm tired. So anyway, I enjoyed the rhythm, and rhyme of it, but I couldn't quite grasp the ...

Hey Flit! I thought this piece was excellent. Something about it reminded me a great deal of Shakespeare, and I love it. I have a few little tiny things to ...

Oh my god Shina you are GOURGOUS!!

Shina, are you the one on the right or left?

Hey welcome back! I hope to see you around, and get to know you :D. ~Hope

Let me first point out that you don't need to capitalize the beginning of every line, it follows the same rules as when writing for stories, capitalize when you start ...

I can dance with the fibbers; Fibbers, like liars? I didn't like how it repeated so much, mostly with the "With its bittersweet chills", and "It pierces my tongue and ...

Romance- Contacts really aren't that bad, haha trust me, they even make ones you can sleep in, which are awesome. Dream- You sir, are very handsome. Totally would have taken ...

Hey Tayla! So you want your work reviewed? Well then you came to the right site, but you're in the wrong place. What you're looking for is the Will Review ...

Hey there Emily! I'm Hope :) Welcome to our family! As Durrie pointed out there is in fact a forum for your begging. It's called Will Review For Food.

I think you mean Instructor, not Mod. xD

Hey, I thought I'd just hop in and tell you that you made a little typo. "Dizzy" you put as "Dzizy". Also, why is "round and round" in italics? Anyway, ...

This poem to me came across as a little on the creepy side. Like an obsessive, Silence of the Lambs type guy. I don't know if that's what you meant ...