BondGirl007

Oh wow...this has to be some of the best poetry I've read in a long time, and I've been reading a lot of poetry lately. You told a story, using ...

Haha, this is good...Very original subject. This is one of my favorite rhyming scheme, and I rarely read any poems using it.I'm not really one for long poems so this ...

It's short, and most of the rhymes feel a little forced. But it's not that fact I kind of like it :D. This line though, I absolutely love. You call ...

Hey Rachel, so...I didn't love the poem, but I didn't hate it either. Because it's so short, it doesn't really stand out to me, there's really no poetic examples, like ...

Lack of punctuation, and capitalization of the first letter of every line are tow things that really bug me when reading poetry, both of which you did here. But that's ...

I enjoyed the way you compared life to walking along a highway, I do have a few little nitpicks though. But just know that nothings of good cheer I believe ...

Finished...More please! :D

She removed a silver necklace where it shimmered; a light in the darkness. What does she do with the necklace? Does she give it to the girl? Or does she ...

Well, this wasn't to bad, the subject is a little over done, but it's not the most horrible poem on the face of the earth. But I understand needing to ...

I have two big points with this poem. 1- The Spelling. You had many spelling errors, lack of proper capitalization, and you used & instead of and. Those things irked ...

You picked a very meaningful subject to write about, I've been around a lot of alcoholics, and you portrayed this really well, especially in the last line. She sits and ...

I really loved the first line of this poem, She was a wondrous flower,as I was an ugly weed.She was a gracious lion,as I was a stinging bee. I think ...

Hey Howler, so you picked a pretty cool subject to write a poem on, luck and chance, I like that. The actual execution of the poem, ehh...not so much. You ...

So it was a little rough around the edges, but I think it's pretty good :D. Just a little pet peeve of mine when you write I'd, don't forget the ...

Hey there Tiger, so let me first start out by saying that I've read a lot of poetry in the last few days, and this really sticks out. It's got ...