BondGirl007

I loved this poem, you did a bang up job on it. I find it funny, some of the best poetry I've read lately has had no capitalization, and has ...

Yeah, it reminds me of when I was younger, and the playground memories...haha now I really want to go swing. I have to agree with Amy about the end, it ...

Hey Leza! I just wanted to say great job. I myself am a story writer who trys at poetry, and I'll tell you, you're way better at it then I ...

Hey Rebel, first off- very interesting subject to write a poem on. I like the idea a lot. There is one thing I see, and that's that you repeat words ...

Well I found this poem really hard to read. It was all over the place, and either very elaborate metaphors or just very random...I couldn't really decipher what this is ...

I love absolutely sonnets, and I thought this one was pretty good :). You've got a way of rhyming, at time I felt the rhythm was a little off, but ...

*Reviews* This is Sparta!

You used a kind of odd mixture of old and modern English, which I found a little annoying, but at the same time I like to see that old English ...

Hey TJ, welcome to YWS! Pm me if you have any questions about anything, okay? ~Hope

Beautiful poem, you conveyed your emotions really well, and even got me tearing up (and that's a big deal.) I got a feel for who she was, and I could ...

Hey there Novus, I really liked the simplicity of this poem, good job. I have a few things I'd like to point out. Red chrysanthemums grown in a box on ...

I thought this was pretty good...a little hard to get through, but once I got the meaning, I like it. The last stanza I really could identify with because I ...

Okay, so some of your descriptions were kind of odd. Like "Fangs of his chocolate hair" I mean fangs? That doesn't really give me the image of hair. This whole ...

Hey Ink, I'd like to first start out by saying that I really liked this piece, you've got a great style that I envy. You've got an awesome flow, and ...

It's an alright poem, I know being a teenage girl, a lot of our thoughts are about guys, but I've read so many poems about teenage love, so that I'm ...