BondGirl007

When you're up until four am, talking to people and reviewing. Also when more then half your facebook friends are YWSers. :D

Kammie! Congrats you get my one hundredth review! But I have a feeling it's not going to be a very helpful one, since this, as everyone else said is great ...

Welcome back Angel, and everyone else!

Hey Gene! SO this is pretty good for not being a poet, but one of the main things I have to say with rhyming poetry is that a lot of ...

Hey Erika! Welcome to YWS! I'm Hope and it's a pleasure to greet you :). So don't worry about the whole wannabe writer thing, we all are wannabes here haha. ...

Hey Crescent! I'm sure you'll fit it perfectly here! :D Spelling, and opposition with fictional characters and smilies? Yeah, definitely :P. The smilies here are awesome, this one's gotta be ...

Hi Fiction! It's very short, and I don't get much from it so I don't think it really belongs in Narrative, since Narrative poetry is all about telling a story. ...

Hey Hawkie! This is a cute poem, I know I myself have felt like this at times. I totally agree with June about the last part of the poem. I ...

Hey Forest! I've been reviewing a lot of your poetry lately, and you're pretty good once you get away from cliches and repetition. Those, I think are your two biggest ...

Hey Lyn! I liked how the poem started out, I thought it was really cute. I didn't really like how you kept repeating "I promise" though. The whole thing is ...

Hey Timmy, I think this is pretty darn good for rhyming poetry, you should try free form, I'll bet you'd be great. The rhymes seem a bit forced, but I ...

Hey Kylan, So like Jack said it is very elongated, and you do take a while to get to your point. It feels a little tedious at times, which makes ...

Hey Lydia! So you've got a really cool way of rhyming, which I really like, it doesn't sound too forced which is a common problem when you try to rhyme ...

Okay so the beginning I found was kind of boring, which is not a good thing. The beginning is one of the most important parts, it's what draws your reader ...

Hey Emmy! The things you need to work on are using poetic imagery, and giving us the readers more information. You're very vague, and we as the reader want to ...