BondGirl007

Hey Angel! So first off, I agree with Knife about pieces written purely to process emotions. You have fallen into the biggest poetry pits, subject wise. "Can't he see that ...

Very funny Hiadel, I must say. Something very different from the normal teen romance stories you find here, which was nice. I'm with Snoink on that last part, at first ...

Hey there Caitlin! Now looking at it at first seems pretty huge and kind of turned me off of reading it, but once I did it wasn't bad :D. I ...

Hey Chandler! I'm Hope, welcome to YWS :D! So, like Blink said, and as you can see I'm a greeter, and that's my little job around here, and I do ...

Hey there Living! Alright, so the subject is great, anything that's not about love, or depression I try to read. War is all around us, we hear about it all ...

Finished! :D Come on people! I want to be flooded with reviews I have to do. Let's go!

Hey Pudin! I thought this was really cute. It reminded me, like the others said, of a kind of Shakespeare-esque poem. I didn't really like the He She parts, but ...

Hey Treem! It was cool talking to you in chat! You seem pretty cool :) Welcome to YWS, I hope to see you around! ~Hope

Hey there Haly! Well, you've already been here for about a week, how are you liking it so far? Have you made any friends yet? We're like a really big ...

Hey there Nova! First off welcome to YWS and a quick word of advice the more reviews you do the more likely people are to review your work ;). So ...

Hey Pen, well there's not much I can say here, Hippie got to it first, and I agree with most of the things he said. What I suggest is slow ...

Working on it now Pen! And Molly, link me please ;) Pm, or post here, whatever...it's just a hassle having to go look for it ;).

Hey Valentine! Welcome dude! You last name rocks, and Death Cab for Cutie

Hey Rune welcome back!! Totally sucks about your email, I had that happened to me once, and it's not fun. I don't have anything to review, so I'm just stopping ...

Hey BD! Alright, so first off if I say anything mean, don't take it personally, this is meant to help improve your writing, and if I sound mean I'm not ...