BondGirl007

Alright, so I haven't had Internet for the past week or so, so everything requested so far I won't be able to review for at least another week. Possibly two. ...

Alright Jasmine, you request, I fulfill. Well it's pretty much been nitpicked thoroughly, so I'll just add my thoughts. It's actually pretty good, for it being written randomly, and I ...

They met at a ball She wore a white dress They chatted like old friends She fiddled with her hair, every tress Yech, I'm sorry but this rhyme is horrible. ...

Hey Jasmine! This definitely is one of your better works, so far I like the main character, she's got spirit, and drive, which I really like. What you need to ...

Hey Leanna! So for your first crack at poetry, it's not all that bad, but I can see that you're a story writer just by the way you write. What ...

Hey AJ! First off welcome to YWS! I hope you'll like it here :). Now, it's quite short, which makes it a little tougher to review, but I'll just go ...

I really don't feel guilty anymore... I do remember feeling that a lot, not that long ago, because I had been here for about five months and only had about ...

Well, this part is a little bit of a letdown after the last chapter you wrote, but it's not bad. It gives us a little bit of a look into ...

Hey Jasmine! Wow, I think this is some of the best writing you've done so far, I really like it. There are a few simple spelling mistakes that caught my ...

Hmmm, definitely interesting, and slightly creepy. What I want to suggest to you, and I noticed you do this with pretty much all your stories, is when you want to ...

Definitely better then the first chapter, the plot's rather cliche, but it's not too bad. I took out the book I was reading, Emma and flipped to where I left ...

I read the first chapter you did with this, and I'll say this one's better, but one thing that really bugs me is the main character. I don't feel any ...

Alright Jasmine, you're so on. Alright, so it seems like an okay prologue, the beginning I thought was pretty good, although I really disliked this line. I am not good-looking ...

Hey Ruin! First off welcome to YWS! I hope you'll like it here :). Now since this is so short, as Tiffany pointed out, it makes it harder to review. ...

Thank you! Finished!