BondGirl007

Hey Kitty! I really like this poem, I think you did a great job on it. It's different, it's got nice imagery, and the rhyme doesn't feel forced like most ...

Hey Biffle, well I'll first point out the easy mistakes you can fix. New Zealand, apparently, has a strange ward chemicalin the waters surrounding it, "chemical in" His whanau were ...

Alright, so it wasn't as repetitive as I thought it would be, but I still think you should do this a different way. Ramar moved hastely to deflect it, just ...

Val, yours is done! Keep um comin'!

Well Valentine, it's been pretty thoroughly criticized so I'll just but in my thoughts on this chapter alone, since I still have yet to read the first two. Even though ...

Heya Kanen, since I just read through what you already have I must say that this is a pretty awesome story you have so far. Each chapter kept me entertained, ...

Love yours is done, and I'm reading the story now Valentine.

Hey Fire! This is a great beginning I think, there's not much I really can point out, it's pretty sound. I love the way they're teasing each other in the ...

Hey Love! Here to review! Well, you have a good base of a story, but you really have a lot of work to do on it. The three biggest things ...

Bolt and the Woodchipper.

Wow, this is really great. I absolutely loved it, you've got a creative way of showing the reader things, and it's beautiful. I was as Ranger was, confused by the ...

Lol Benny, and it's done :D.

Hey Merlin! Hehe This poem made me smile, it's very cute. The subject is very original, so yay for that! But let me just remind you, not all poetry has ...

Hey Nati, Bondgirl here to add another review for your lovely poem! You've got pretty awesome visuals, and I love that it reminded me of a lot of the same ...

'Ello Wiggy my dear! Review time! :D I like this poem, it's got a great feel to it, and I enjoy it, you portray the message very well. Now I ...