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Re: Make me....I dare you
lol Ben, finished :D
Thu Mar 18, 2010 7:02 pm -
Re: Yours Truly
Benny! :D Ah girl poems...corny and cheesy, yet very effective in wooing ;) so first off congrats on the girl, she's very lucky :D now on with the review! Now ...
Wed Mar 17, 2010 8:32 pm -
Re: Make me....I dare you
Done!
Tue Mar 16, 2010 10:14 pm -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Ginger hair ftw Meg ;).
Tue Mar 16, 2010 10:13 pm -
Re: A clown inside a cloud
Well to tell you the truth it was strange, and confusing. The clown or whatever it was, it's point of view was just odd...I assume you're going to explain more ...
Tue Mar 16, 2010 10:12 pm -
Re: Can't Catch Myself
Hi there! Bond here to review your lovely poem! :D First off that is an awesome assignment, and you did a great job with it. Seeing as you had a ...
Thu Mar 11, 2010 6:02 am -
Re: Look Into My Eyes
Hey Val, I quite liked this poem, you've got a very cool style that I really love, but I've got a few suggestions on some stanzas and lines that I ...
Thu Mar 11, 2010 5:53 am -
Re: The Game of Lies and Rumors
Hey there Mae! Bond here to review! You've got a wonderful subject here, and a lot of good lines. The only thing is that the way you've repeated a lot ...
Thu Mar 11, 2010 5:39 am -
Re: M is for Murphy
Hey Bmat! Before I start my review let me just say this. Puppy!! *Awws and loves like the girl she is* *cough* Anywho. So the first photo is adorable, but ...
Thu Mar 11, 2010 5:18 am -
Re: Make me....I dare you
No problem Ben :) finished. Note to all going to post!! I'm going to be in Florida for the next two weeks, and the only computer I have is my ...
Thu Mar 11, 2010 4:22 am -
Re: (E&iC) Modern Angers. [Adult Humour]
Heya Benny boy! I enjoyed this quite a lot, you made many points that I agree heartily with. The only thing is that you kind of get wrapped up in ...
Thu Mar 11, 2010 4:13 am -
Re: Dare to Dream
Heya Durrie! First off I wish I could do this, I fail at photo editing xD. So review time! The 1st one- I love the colors in this, and how ...
Wed Mar 10, 2010 6:56 am -
Re: The Red Secrets -- Preview
Well this is extraordinarily short, and the language you've used in writing it is simple, bland, not at all what you want to read in a story most of the ...
Wed Mar 10, 2010 6:31 am -
Re: hey ya'll!
Hi there Charlotte! I'm Hope, and I hope (no pun intended) to be your very first friend here on YWS! :) I had the same kind of thing with my ...
Wed Mar 10, 2010 6:12 am -
Re: My Urban Butterfly
Hey there! I love the colors in this shot, the reds and yellows are absolutely gorgeous! The only little thing is that my eyes are drawn to the second plant, ...
Wed Mar 10, 2010 5:37 am
