BondGirl007

She walks like a poisoned rose; This I think is the best line in the poem, it's really the only one that gives us an idea without directly stating it, ...

Alright Ellie! Here we go... beautiful plucked strings calm audiences for some it's the prettiest music they heard This whole stanza to me, it's just ehh. You say it's the ...

Done! :D

Hey Skins! Well I think you're doing a pretty good job of moving the story along, and keeping it pretty interesting. Every one's pretty much covered everything. One thing though, ...

Ellie's is done, I'll get on Skin's soon.

Oh Ellie...Where do I start?... Well first off, I thought the beginning was sounded sort of myth like, and that was fine. But then it turned from that into a ...

Because I have nothing better to do. :mrgreen: By the way, if you double click on any picture with scroll bars, it will maximize it ;).

It's done McDreamy ;)

Hey McDreamy! Thanks for the review request :). So the first thought I had about it was that it was kind of boring. Your style is great, but just the ...

Alright...I'm going to give it to you straight. You need a lot of work. You've got some great story ideas, and you do a good basic outline, but there's a ...

Howler... Jeez where do I begin... You've got a pretty good subject, but you turn it into a self centered kind of repetitive rant type thing. It's just you saying ...

Done!

Heya Skins! As said before you really have a way of drawing me into the story, which is great! The things I would suggest to you is that you introduce ...

Now here's the way I look at "Bad" words. When you go back and think about what "curse" words and their meanings, they're not "BAD" right? Now take this for ...

Bye the way, they're both done.