BondGirl007

Hey there Ember! Well first off I'm confused, is this your script, or something you acted in? It's a very good script, but a few minor things that needs fixing. ...

Hey Howler! This reminded me very much of Roald Dahl's writing style, and had a sort of same strange characters and interesting end. It's not exactly what I love to ...

Hey Skittle! Hope here to review! Where I am standing, The ground is tainted. Tainted with the blood of the innocent. Don't use that there, it's unnecessary and just takes ...

Ellie look who's gotten into writing poetry all of a sudden :D! Well the title drew me in, I'm a huge Shakespeare girl. I've acted in a bunch of plays, ...

First off welcome to YWS! I hope you like it around here, meet some friends, read some of our great writers, and review some good works :D. Wow. I have ...

Hey Ol! Well, it's a little on the short side, but that's okay, but you might want to try putting it into separate stanzas. It makes it easier to read, ...

Done Celtic ;)

Sorry it took so long for me to get to this Celtic, but I'm here now :D. Well first off it's way to quick, I want to hear about all ...

Well I love the title, but the thing is, that right now it seems like more of just a basic synopsis of Goldfinger. I want more showing, not telling, right ...

Silented came and visited me for my birthday :D.

Both Done! More please!

Hey Jas! Thanks for asking me to review :D. Alright so the whole first paragraph kind of turned me away from reading, it was just so...cliche, and the repetition of ...

Hey Lala! First off you do a great job with this, I could really see what was happening in the story in my head while reading it. There are a ...

First off, you said that you still had another 200 words or something like that right? So what I recommend is adding a little detail into the story. Right now ...

Done Ellie! :D More pretty please!