BondGirl007

The Beginning: Noisy footsteps trampled through the metal corridors. Small red dots floated along the walls and piping, casting a haunted glow. Okay, so I'm not really getting what these ...

Hey Skins :D Do you think you could review this for me? Thanks!

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Hi there! Bond here to review! I must say I enjoyed this poem a lot. It's a little cheesy, but the girl in me loves it. The only thing I ...

Done! :D

So yeah. Hope + too much punk music= punk song/poem thing. Have at it people! Tear it to shreds. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Millions are dead, their masks painted with lead. Poison in ...

Hey Ember! Congratulations you get to be my 200th review! :D Well I have to say, this is excellent. Really and truly excellent. You've got talent :) I love Vivica, ...

Hey Thane, the lyric forum is for lyrics you've written yourself, not songs you like ;). How about posting them in a blog instead. People will still see it, and ...

Well Emmy, it's short, and simple and as Freak said, pretty easily predictable, and really makes me feel nothing at all. Try reading some more poetry, its like a test, ...

Hey there! Well I definitely like the inverted color image better, the original looks a little too scattered in my opinion. The negative makes it seem less everywhere, but still ...

Hey Penny! I actually quite like this, which is pretty rare for me, normally I hate lost love poems, but you did a very good job with this one, so ...

Okay, well the biggest thing here is the inconsistent rhyme. You have none in the beginning, then by the end you start rhyming. Pick on or the other, personally I ...

It was not often that I did this , but when I did I took it in full pleasure in it . That was until he showed up. If it ...

Hey there KAH! It's a little short, but that's okay, I have a few quick tips though. A light pops in front of me Then it slowly recedes Back into ...

The sand crunches underneath my baked feet; I am a Titan, the only one left. I don't think baked is really the right word here. It sounds strange. I carry ...