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  • Other Poetry Re: The War Inside My Head

    Hey King! I actually like this poem, it's not bad, and has a pretty cool concept. I agree somewhat with Knightly, it doesn't have much really interesting word play, or ...

    May 4, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Penetrating the Pale Horse (1)

    Darn it Classy! I'm this close to crying right now...I don't cry. It was the ending that got me...It's beautiful. Really emotional, and beautiful. I love the way that the ...

    May 4, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Orchids

    Hiya Vitamins! So basically what you did here was take some alright shots and edited them, and I commend you on that! Using grayscale to accent the colors is something ...

    May 4, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Part one: I'm You!

    Giving the wrench one last good turn to the right , the pipe came lose and fell to the bottom of the cabinet. Wait, I'm having childhood flashbacks...what happened to ...

    May 4, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Where I'm From

    Hey Hawkie! I haven't seen you around in a while! :D Well first off I can't even begin to think of how many where I am from poems I've read/reviewed, ...

    May 4, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Prologue

    The rough rust of the chains scraped at my interlocked wrists, making blood run down my arm. It dripped on to my shoulder, and it made me more aware of ...

    May 4, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Modern Oracle pt. 1

    Hi there Nightmare! Bond here with a few quick edits! My tormentor slammed his booted foot onto my head, squeezing it into the loose dirt. Okay so at first reading ...

    May 4, 2010
  • Scripts Re: Deleted

    Hey Ember! Thanks for the PM! Now this chapter/scene is so far the one I have the most nitpicks for. Like I have no idea how much time has passed ...

    May 3, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: A Sort Of Drawing

    First off...holy crap on a cracker that's big O_O. Second Is it the little thing on the right? Because right now that's the only thing that looks at all like ...

    May 3, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Popularity Wars Chapter Two

    Okay, so you've got some pretty thorough critics, so I'm just going to say a few quick things that I think need to be fixed, and forgive me if they've ...

    May 3, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Horror: Dancing the Night Away

    Okay, well since this is almost exactly like the other story I reviewed I was wondering are they connected? Is Horror the title or something? I thought you were just ...

    May 3, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Some pics :)

    Hiya there! So the first one is definitely the best of the three. The background is blurred perfectly and it's just a really cool picture overall. But my eyes tend ...

    May 3, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Thief: Chapter One *Needs help & I hate the title!!*

    Hey there Jas! I noticed this didn't have any reviews, so I thought I'd change that :D. Bland brown eyes, average brown hair, not too tall, not too short, nothing ...

    May 3, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Mom is Cooking Again. (a childrens poem)

    Hey Esther! I really liked this poem a lot! It reminded me a lot of Shel Silverstein's work. If you haven't heard of him, look him up. He has some ...

    May 3, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Extreme Days (PG-13) Part two.

    Hey Rockey! So far I'm quite liking this story. I like how you changed the narrative from third person to her first person. I'm wondering if you're going to do ...

    May 3, 2010


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