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Re: The War Inside My Head
Hey King! I actually like this poem, it's not bad, and has a pretty cool concept. I agree somewhat with Knightly, it doesn't have much really interesting word play, or ...
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Re: Penetrating the Pale Horse (1)
Darn it Classy! I'm this close to crying right now...I don't cry. It was the ending that got me...It's beautiful. Really emotional, and beautiful. I love the way that the ...
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Re: Orchids
Hiya Vitamins! So basically what you did here was take some alright shots and edited them, and I commend you on that! Using grayscale to accent the colors is something ...
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Re: Part one: I'm You!
Giving the wrench one last good turn to the right , the pipe came lose and fell to the bottom of the cabinet. Wait, I'm having childhood flashbacks...what happened to ...
May 4, 2010 -
Re: Where I'm From
Hey Hawkie! I haven't seen you around in a while! :D Well first off I can't even begin to think of how many where I am from poems I've read/reviewed, ...
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Re: Prologue
The rough rust of the chains scraped at my interlocked wrists, making blood run down my arm. It dripped on to my shoulder, and it made me more aware of ...
May 4, 2010 -
Re: The Modern Oracle pt. 1
Hi there Nightmare! Bond here with a few quick edits! My tormentor slammed his booted foot onto my head, squeezing it into the loose dirt. Okay so at first reading ...
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Re: Deleted
Hey Ember! Thanks for the PM! Now this chapter/scene is so far the one I have the most nitpicks for. Like I have no idea how much time has passed ...
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Re: A Sort Of Drawing
First off...holy crap on a cracker that's big O_O. Second Is it the little thing on the right? Because right now that's the only thing that looks at all like ...
May 3, 2010 -
Re: Popularity Wars Chapter Two
Okay, so you've got some pretty thorough critics, so I'm just going to say a few quick things that I think need to be fixed, and forgive me if they've ...
May 3, 2010 -
Re: Horror: Dancing the Night Away
Okay, well since this is almost exactly like the other story I reviewed I was wondering are they connected? Is Horror the title or something? I thought you were just ...
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Re: Some pics :)
Hiya there! So the first one is definitely the best of the three. The background is blurred perfectly and it's just a really cool picture overall. But my eyes tend ...
May 3, 2010 -
Re: Thief: Chapter One *Needs help & I hate the title!!*
Hey there Jas! I noticed this didn't have any reviews, so I thought I'd change that :D. Bland brown eyes, average brown hair, not too tall, not too short, nothing ...
May 3, 2010 -
Re: Mom is Cooking Again. (a childrens poem)
Hey Esther! I really liked this poem a lot! It reminded me a lot of Shel Silverstein's work. If you haven't heard of him, look him up. He has some ...
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Re: Extreme Days (PG-13) Part two.
Hey Rockey! So far I'm quite liking this story. I like how you changed the narrative from third person to her first person. I'm wondering if you're going to do ...
May 3, 2010
