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Re: Ads Are Back
Naaaaate I don't liiiike grey it looks so sad D: But the ads I don't really mind, as long as YWS is still here I'm okay.
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: Change One Letter [2]
BOLT!
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: New/More Leaderboards
Duuuude I love it. So so much!
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: Make me....I dare you
Keep em comin people!
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: Rosary
Hey Danny! Hope here to give you a proper review! So to start out with it's kind of got an odd focus in the necklace. Without you telling me what ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Mistake (Part 1)
The originally bright blue walls, had faded down into a dull grey, just like Ryan's his mother's life. Love the meaning behind this, very good. She returned to the used ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Thief Chpt 2 Part 2 :D
I really wish you would have kept going with this story, I rather liked it. This chapter's pretty short so there's not much to comment on, but I did find ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Mary-Sue: A life
Ohh my god. I love you so so so much. This was a fantastic example of what NOT to do with your characters. I see so many MCs like this ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Ignore this completely. Don't let it exist in your mind. :p
SO MANY HACKIN REVIEWS. Even though we were identical twins, Selene still managed to end up prettier. Selene's Her straight strawberry-blonde hair was always shiny and neat, her ocean blue ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: *Untitled* Book about Pirates
Hey there! I'm Hope, here to review! “All hands on deck!” Father yelled, bounding up the ladder to the deck. The boat swayed dangerously back and forth. I tightened my ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Mr. Johns (Part One)
Okay I swear to god I already reviewed this, but apparently not. Oh well. The chair was cold and hard, lines of dried scarlet blood staining the metal legs Dried ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Where Lost Deams Go to Die
Not bad, not my favorite, but not bad. Tranquility reigns hold and I let the air around me be the only sound The part in blue I don't really get, ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Welcome to Hell
Woo Jas I actually really enjoyed this, the rhyme I didn't mind at all and the concept I found really interesting. I don't know if I would have understood that ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Untitled right now. Needs help :) Short though.
Ohai der Your discovery is interrupted by a click and opening of door embedded into the wall. A nurse walks in holding a syringe The nurse stabs the needle clear ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Haiku
Well there's not much I can say about a haiku, so I'll just tell you what I think about it. A lot of your poetry is about love, and lies ...
Feb 3, 2011
