BondGirl007

Hey KAH! Alright first off a little note to you and the reviewer above you, if you are going to post works, and want them reviewed, you need to review. ...

But uhh...I'm pretty sure Italy did fight in World War II...

I must say I loved this xDD. A lot. It would make a great kids book if it were illustrated and added onto a little bit. Right now it's very ...

Okay, well I've read this story before. Not this exact story just the plot line. Girl loves a guy who's a big jerk, she has a best friend who's a ...

The sun painted Leah’s eyelids pink as she lay on the cool grass. She watched as the pink grew darker when a cloud passed in front of it, blocking its ...

I remember when I was little , b efore any of my real life started. The days I spent doing nothing ... n othing but playing and running around with ...

Her stunning face ran through my mind that made me feel crazy like hell. Crazy as hell? Before I could get into her room, a tall and dark-haired doctor used ...

Hi there Luvzi! I thought this was a very cute story, based on a movie I used to watch all the time when I was younger. Now I love your ...

Hey there Irish! So the biggest thing this story is in want for is description. I want to be able to picture the clearing, the woods, and especially the dark ...

So at first I was confused about what was going on, but I love how by the end I know exactly what's happened. I've never read a poem about anything ...

I think this is a pretty awesome story and I love that it's the other side of Ellie's story. I really love seeing both sides of rivaling characters, and their ...

Hey Howler! I recently did something almost exactly like this, listening to music then having the urge to write your own type of lyrics/poem thing. So wooo for us cool ...

Okay I didn't actually mind it too much for it being a "oh they broke my heart" poem. Not at all the most original poem ever, but if you do ...

So really there's not much real poem to this. It doesn't make me feel anything, it's too telling and not showing us anything, and it's a little bland. You want ...

Okay, so I'm not exactly sure what this poem is all about...I'm kind of lost to the meaning and what it's trying to accomplish here. It has something to do ...