BondGirl007

Hi there Rose! I'm Hope, and I'll be reviewing today! This is absolutely beautiful poem, your word use is lovely, and I simply loved it. It was a tad confusing ...

Okay, when writing a poem, you don't want it to be all questions, because when there are tons of questions and no answers it makes for a rather boring poem. ...

Hi there Bumblebee! So this is very funky, I love the colors and texture you've used, and I really love that little design in the left hand corner, I'm a ...

Hi Baby, Bond to review again. So Skins has done yet another fantastic review and has basically covered all bases, but I'll add in a few suggestions that I hope ...

So first off definitely take the first two comments into consideration, they made points that I wanted to make, but I'd rather not repeat what has already been said. One ...

I agree with Snoink on this one, I'd like to see a little more why, and less because. But I rather liked it and enjoyed reading it, just one quick ...

Hey Jas! So I've reviewed literally almost everything you've ever posted, and I am amazed how much you've grown as a writer. You've improved so much since you first joined, ...

Well first thing's first. HolycrapI'mreallysuperjealoushowthehellcanyoudrawsowellthisisjusttoodarnawesome*fangirlsqueal*. Okay. Now that that's over lets get on with the review. Really the only thing

Greetings fellow 007! Bond here to review your poem! So first of, capitalize! In poetry you follow pretty much the same rules as when writing stories. Capitalize the beginnings of ...

Hey Madd! I saw the title and was reading before you could say "A martini shaken, not stirred." I as YWS's resident Bond nut, feel it is my duty to ...

Okay well now I'm never going to eat cake again... But the biggest problem is the rhythm. You don't have a consistent pattern which throws off the poem. Sometimes you ...

I’m Jessica Cleave. I’m nine, and this is my story. First off this is a very boring way to start off a story, the beginnings of stories are very important, ...

Okay, I'm going to be straight with you. This needs a lot of work, and I hope I don't sound mean in my review, because I'm trying to help, okay? ...

I used to take ballet for years, and I'm a huge drawing freak, so this is like an awesome two in one! So here are the things you need to ...

The mist was cold in the city , it prowl ed around the streets like a hungry dog. People had began to circle around the Square. A large, preened man ...