BondGirl007

Hi there Bee! So as a fellow art and music lover this is a very interesting drawing for me to critic. I love the perspective it's drawn from and I ...

Okay, since it's unedited, instead of nitpicking at it, I'll just tell you some of the things that I think the actual story itself needs improving on. So the characters ...

Well as the other two reviewers said, that last stanza seems a little disconnected from the rest of the poem, because you focused so much on the daughter, and there ...

Hey Jas! Well Hawkie's right about the all telling, little showing, and you might want to work on that. But I rather like what you have here so far, it's ...

Okay well first off O_O HOLY CRAP THIS IS AWESOME. It's amazing that it took you only a week, but I could see that happening, I take art classes once ...

Hi there Myst! I really love this, it's pretty awesome and you did a good job with it. Now I don't think the lips look that bad, a little too ...

I just let myself slowly slip toward the bottom of what I was assuming was the ocean. I could feel the cold water spilling into my lungs, my eyes closing. ...

I'm finally alone at last. It's taken me all day. They can't see the beauty, even I have my doubts . And people climb the waterfall, I do hope for ...

Hey KAH! This is pretty cool! I really love the robot cat dinosaur thing, it's awesome. One suggestion, it's really hard to see, and I know that scans aren't exactly ...

These are really cool, I can see these being tattoos. I agree with Jenthura, that they would look even cooler if you colored them in with colored pencil. I'm really ...

Small, gray cloud innocent, lethargic. It sits and looks a sullen gray pitiful and sad. All alone, no friends. A small, gray cloud. Okay so this poem is very short, ...

This is a beautiful way to remember something so horrible and tragic. It's depressing to read, because I remember the day it happened. I was a little let down after ...

Hey Skins! So it's pretty much been nitpicked pretty well, so I won't repeat what's already been said. The one thing I thought was a little strange was that so ...

Hey there! Just popping in to give you a few quick tips. So first off contractions. People these days rarely say "I am sorry, I cannot do that today." they ...

Hiya there! I'm Hope and I'll be doing a review for you :D. First all the grammar errors. A car r ot was walking in the forest w hen a ...