BondGirl007

Hiya there! I haven't read any of the other chapters, but what really stood out to me in this was Peter's character. He seemed very childish, and for the first ...

Okay well first off the title I think you meant to say "Not Much To Lose." Spelling lose like loose bugs the heck outta me, and it's something that happens ...

I noticed that this only had one review! I must change that!! I haven't read the other chapters, so I'm just going to give a general review. “What the heck?! ...

Alright, well I don't know if this is some kind of joke or something, but I'm just going to give it to you straight. You need to step it up. ...

The morning sun peaked through the dusted window and ripped at my exposed head above the stained dark blue blanket. A radiant block of light below my lethargic sight leaking ...

Well this caught my eye so I decided to look through it, and review. But I honestly think this belongs elsewhere, it's seems to me, it's a short story, not ...

I agree with Amy, she gives good advice, and is in general a very awesome person, so listen to her :D. Also I just wanted to say that I did ...

Okay so the biggest thing with the poem, is that I don't feel any kind of emotions while reading it. It just doesn't have anything that catches my eye, or ...

Well good to see you posting again! Now the biggest thing I've noticed is that you have the characters using kind of a fluffy, sort of 1930's sort of language. ...

Hi there! I'm Hope, and the title of this poem caught my eye ;). Now it's really really short, only one stanza long. I suggest you add to it, it ...

Yay Zanne! You have done something I never thought possible, wrote a rhyming love poem, and have it work. Not only did it work, I really liked it. Your lips ...

I totally agree with Bolt, I just looked at the last like 8 pages, and it's all the same people, all nominating each other.

Hey Lava! So the first and forth ones are definitely the best ones here, I thought I'd just say that before I go in depth about each photo :). 1) ...

Granted, but the sky really did fall on him this time, and he's been squished. I wish that the radio would get some good music, instead of the pop garbage ...

Hi there Thing! Alright so what I think could really use improvement here is you need to stop telling us, and start showing. Right now it's just "I do this, ...