BondGirl007

You bought three things with $160?? O_O

Scar- Smile girly! Anger :O how did I not know you were this pretty?? Buuuneh!!Lilicia you're so pretty, and your bunny is so cute!!

So I'm going to do a pretty in depth review, I'll be changing the format, comments in blue, corrections in red. You said shred it, so that's what I did. ...

Hey Yuri! So after reading this over, in my opinion what you really need to work on is not your poetic examples, like most poems I run into, because you've ...

I'm going to be original and say the hat. :P

Finished :D

Hey Lizzy! So I'm not going to read any of the other reviews so forgive me if I say stuff that's been said before :). 1- This one I'm not ...

JD, I thought you would be...Blonder xD

I'm removing this after awhile. Oh, and why am I so tan? Just cause' Gotta love Hurricane Harbor tans

Final count, 23. Change this thread's title to "WORSHIP JACK", kthxbai. All in favor say aye!

Woo! Awesome review day! I did five, I feel so proud xD Highfive everyone, especially Jack who kicked butt!

' "You can leave me for Alice. (Space) I know she is the one for you." Now first off, posting a snippet of a novel is rather difficult to review, ...

Right in front of me there were two guard in heavy armor , t hey were guarding a richly decorated door behind them. There was M y target. I saw ...

The kid stumbled through the forest, frightened, alone, and hungry. So as a hook this isn't very catchy. Describe the kid, the forest he's running through, the stabbing pains in ...

Well this is a very interesting piece to read. I really like it, it puts an interesting spin on childhood and growing up, and using familiar faces that people know ...