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This is the start of a 3 part book story. I will cherish in the constructive criticism I hope you shall give me. Feel free to tell me everything you ...

I love it. Although there are a few bits that seem made to pad out the story, I am able to see how your characters seem like real people.

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I love it. Although there are a few bits that seem made to pad out the story, I am able to see how your characters seem like real people.

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I love it. Although there are a few bits that seem made to pad out the story, I am able to see how your characters seem like real people.

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I love it. Although there are a few bits that seem made to pad out the story, I am able to see how your characters seem like real people.