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Re: A Quiet Blush
Normal review: Good gravy sauce you handled this story amazingly(I'm so cheesy I have no idea how you did it but you managed to handle romance much better in your ...
Oct 7, 2017 -
Re: Stray part 1 / A fictional tale from the perspective of a street dog
Okay I really like this. Everything can be pictured so vividly. and this reminds me of Disney. I also love how you have the dogs act mentally like humans. This ...
Sep 27, 2017 -
Re: Trials of a Master Thief: Chapter 1
Pros: I for one love the characters. I like how you can perfectly envision where the characters are. I adore the way you describe everything. I have to say this ...
Sep 20, 2017 -
Re: Magic, Bread, and Blood ~ 1
I get the whole justice and karma thing. I really do. But there is no way she should have bad luck. If you wanted to make us dislike her show ...
Sep 19, 2017 -
Re: The Light Maiden's Mark, Chapter 2 - Of Dark Lords and Mystics
I wonder how you will be able to make our protagonist be really important. After all if your character has magic. What's the point of everyone else having magic. Unless ...
Sep 19, 2017 -
Re: There's a Fine Line Prologue (GORE WARNING)
First off, oh god the grammar problems. Second I have never heard of the original story you are basing this off of but the art style looks good. What are ...
Sep 19, 2017 -
Re: The Light Maiden's Mark, Chapter 1 - Longing for the Dreamer
Am I the only one who finds it weird that this seems more like a fantasy genre with a character going to a whole new world. If you want to ...
Sep 18, 2017 -
Re: Addicted to a Shadow - Chapter One
I truly love this idea. In all honesty I legit thought this was going to be a romance story. Luckily it wasn't. I really love the protagonist and how she ...
Sep 18, 2017
