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Touching. Is it based on fact? It feels like its coming from the heart, and i love that. There are one or two things i would change First, We flash ...

Hey Before I start, i am a big reader but i don't review much. Here goes.. Firstly, a few grammatical errors (spelling, etc.), which you will see if you read ...

Now this is a real thinker.. Love the poem, love the message! Good Job. Im pretty new to this stuff. I think that some of your lines could be said ...

Dramatic. What an ass of a father! I liked it because ... well... I dont really know... Ill get back to you on that one. Not bad for thirteen.. But ...