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Re: Breaking Free: Chapter 6
Mama Q! *throws smoked haddock* I'm here to review 8D First impression: I have to admit, every time Ksenia says something witty to the officials, I smile and think, "Yes! ...
Jun 3, 2012 -
Re: Ch 1. (part 2)
Hi, again, Dude! I'm here to review as requested once again. ...Right. Forget about what I said in the last chapter. Forget it xD I loved this chapter too! It ...
Jun 3, 2012 -
Re: Ch 1. (part 1)
Hey Dude! Thanks for requesting :) First impression: xDDD I love the Grandfather and Radi's relationship. It's not a very good one, but it's almost hilarious and definitely interesting. Radi ...
Jun 3, 2012 -
Re: Never Coming Back
Cerrrrrramy! I'm here to review for you. Hope you don't mind 8D First impressions: Aw! This was so cute and adorable. I like how the kid gets comfort from a ...
May 28, 2012 -
Re: The Dreamer - Chapter II
Hi, Steward! I'm here to review as requested. First impressions: Ooh, spacing >< Don't forget to leave a line after each paragraph - it makes it so much easier for ...
May 25, 2012 -
Re: Prologue
Hi, Dude! I'm here as requested. First impressions: I actually really, really like this. I loved your idea and the way you started it with a letter. I don't know ...
May 25, 2012 -
Re: Welcome to Orba Nova Preface, Chapter 1-3
Hey there! I'm here as requested to review :) Allow me to jump straight into my first impressions: Well, yes, I do agree - it does need some work in ...
May 25, 2012 -
Re: Discord Gear
Hi, oNegativeZero! I'm here to review as requested. Impressions of the story: I like your idea! It seems like a very cool idea with The Sound and all the science ...
May 20, 2012 -
Re: The Banished (Prologue)
Hi, Italian! Here to review :) First impressions: Straight into the action with flames and fighting! If it was a regular chapter, I'd have liked something about *where* were the ...
May 12, 2012 -
Re: Fetish
Hi, Adam! Here as requested. This is my first lyric review so bear with me xD Topic - There's a lot of emotion here, which is good. It really helps ...
May 5, 2012 -
Re: No Haven of Mine (Stop and Stare segment)
Hey, Skins! I'm here as requested! Sorry for taking a while to get to this - my internet had been a bit funny lately and has only become stable recently. ...
Mar 28, 2012 -
Re: A Ray of Hope
Hey, Ke--Devan! I'm here to review as requested. (I nearly called you Keane there xD) Before I came to review this, I happened to be listening to this song . ...
Mar 22, 2012 -
Re: Playing The Blame Game. Chapter 1.
Hey Red! I'm finally here as requested :) So, let's get started! First Impressions: Ooh, interesting! Sounds like it must be pretty terrifying to be in that situation and it'd ...
Mar 15, 2012 -
Re: The Underworld Society
Hi there! I'm here to review this for you. Allow me to jump straight in! First impressions: Nice! I particularly like the ending. I had loads of questions in my ...
Mar 10, 2012 -
Re: Following the Red Thread
Hi, Senshi! I'm here as requested. Before I begin, could I ask why everything is bold? Or is it a simple coding error like forgetting the slash before the b? ...
Mar 4, 2012
