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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Breaking Free: Chapter 6

    Mama Q! *throws smoked haddock* I'm here to review 8D First impression: I have to admit, every time Ksenia says something witty to the officials, I smile and think, "Yes! ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Ch 1. (part 2)

    Hi, again, Dude! I'm here to review as requested once again. ...Right. Forget about what I said in the last chapter. Forget it xD I loved this chapter too! It ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Ch 1. (part 1)

    Hey Dude! Thanks for requesting :) First impression: xDDD I love the Grandfather and Radi's relationship. It's not a very good one, but it's almost hilarious and definitely interesting. Radi ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Never Coming Back

    Cerrrrrramy! I'm here to review for you. Hope you don't mind 8D First impressions: Aw! This was so cute and adorable. I like how the kid gets comfort from a ...

    May 28, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Dreamer - Chapter II

    Hi, Steward! I'm here to review as requested. First impressions: Ooh, spacing >< Don't forget to leave a line after each paragraph - it makes it so much easier for ...

    May 25, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Prologue

    Hi, Dude! I'm here as requested. First impressions: I actually really, really like this. I loved your idea and the way you started it with a letter. I don't know ...

    May 25, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Welcome to Orba Nova Preface, Chapter 1-3

    Hey there! I'm here as requested to review :) Allow me to jump straight into my first impressions: Well, yes, I do agree - it does need some work in ...

    May 25, 2012
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Discord Gear

    Hi, oNegativeZero! I'm here to review as requested. Impressions of the story: I like your idea! It seems like a very cool idea with The Sound and all the science ...

    May 20, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Banished (Prologue)

    Hi, Italian! Here to review :) First impressions: Straight into the action with flames and fighting! If it was a regular chapter, I'd have liked something about *where* were the ...

    May 12, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Fetish

    Hi, Adam! Here as requested. This is my first lyric review so bear with me xD Topic - There's a lot of emotion here, which is good. It really helps ...

    May 5, 2012
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: No Haven of Mine (Stop and Stare segment)

    Hey, Skins! I'm here as requested! Sorry for taking a while to get to this - my internet had been a bit funny lately and has only become stable recently. ...

    Mar 28, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Ray of Hope

    Hey, Ke--Devan! I'm here to review as requested. (I nearly called you Keane there xD) Before I came to review this, I happened to be listening to this song . ...

    Mar 22, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Playing The Blame Game. Chapter 1.

    Hey Red! I'm finally here as requested :) So, let's get started! First Impressions: Ooh, interesting! Sounds like it must be pretty terrifying to be in that situation and it'd ...

    Mar 15, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Underworld Society

    Hi there! I'm here to review this for you. Allow me to jump straight in! First impressions: Nice! I particularly like the ending. I had loads of questions in my ...

    Mar 10, 2012
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Following the Red Thread

    Hi, Senshi! I'm here as requested. Before I begin, could I ask why everything is bold? Or is it a simple coding error like forgetting the slash before the b? ...

    Mar 4, 2012


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